Everything Payoff

Now I’m so excited and don’t know how to express my happiness from inside of me. The result was out and the email inside my inbox… email from the travel agency.

The subject of the email just written there: Result.

*Scroll… Scroll… Scroll…

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Team 1 – Melacca Trip: 58% (OMG… only 58%… *worry…)

Team 2 – Penang Trip: Disqualified… breaks the rules and regulation

Team 3 – Sabah Trip: 85% (OMG!!!! Suddenly so high… Oh… our competitor… *speechless)

Team 4 – Sarawak Trip: 84% (OMG!!!! OMG!!!! Once again… another 80++… no hope liao… oledi two high marks here…)

Team 5 – Langkawi Trip: 78% (Now really hopeless liao… all high high marks… :’( continue scroll down with sad face…)

Team 6 – Cameron Trip (Our team…): 90% (Yeah!!!~~~~ WALAU…. I can’t believe what I see and what I read… keep on repeating to read the marks and calculate the easy maths… 45 + 35 + 10 = 90… Correct…)

Scroll down some more to see the rest of the teams.

Team 7 – Pulau Tioman Trip: 74%

Team 8 – Pulau Pangkor Trip: 69%

Oh finished… now confirm that we’re the highest and we win to chance to the next round…

The editor did give some comments for the two teams…

Sabah Trip: The composition of the photos very nice, especially the one from National Park, out of expectation. What needs to improve will be the food, Sabah not only famous with the seafood but some local fruits are very special and some other local food.

About the articles, need to state it nice and clear, explanation not clear.

Cameron Trip: The photos composition is partial to the photography work. But we appreciates your work, also appreciates you to the photographic firm strength, like in the synopsis said that “speaks with the lens”, carries over specially and has curiosity one, please make persistent efforts. In you design in the traveling instruction booklet, there got two photos that chief editor likes, illumination of the sunflower, as well as illumination of the tea garden concurrently flat roof. The main office will introduce this book as the traveling recommendation booklet

The style aspect, is quite good, shows is clear, the writing describes good, keeps up the good work.

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I can’t wait to pass this great news to my friends, especially our lecturer, who helps us to pick up the right photos and correct our articles.

Next round will be in Cambodia, by end of this month, now I need to arrange my offday. I may facing some trouble with my HQ, since this month I’ll take a long leave for my CNY, now I need to extend my leave for the competition.

Thank you for the support from all my lovely friends. THANK YOU…

Original text from the email: (deleted the name of each team members…)

恭 喜！！！

大家好，摄影比赛的成绩，经过委员们的评分下，出炉啦。

以下为各组的分数。

GROUR (1) MELAKA TRIP

照片构图 ( 50% ) --30%

文笔说明 ( 40%) – 20%

组合简介 (10%) – 8%

总分：58%

GROUP (2) PENANG TRIP

取消参赛资格，因违反规律。

GROUP (3) SABAH TRIP

照片构图 ( 50% ) --45%

文笔说明 ( 40%) – 30%

组合简介 (10%) – 10%

总分：85%

GROUP (4) SARAWAK TRIP

照片构图 ( 50% ) --45%

文笔说明 ( 40%) – 30%

组合简介 (10%) – 9%

总分：84%

GROUR (5) LANGKAWI TRIP

照片构图 ( 50% ) --40%

文笔说明 ( 40%) – 30%

组合简介 (10%) – 8%

总分：78%

GROUP (6) CAMERON TRIP

照片构图 ( 50% ) --45%

文笔说明 ( 40%) – 35%

组合简介 (10%) – 10%

总分：90%

GROUP (7) PULAU TIOMAN TRIP

照片构图 ( 50% ) --35%

文笔说明 ( 40%) – 30%

组合简介 (10%) – 9%

总分：74%

GROUP (8) PULAU PANGKOR TRIP

照片构图 ( 50% ) --30%

文笔说明 ( 40%) – 30%

组合简介 (10%) – 9%

总分：69%

恭喜第三组及第六组的参赛者。你们将会参与本社所策划的柬埔寨5天4夜自由行摄影比赛, 一切详情，本社将通知你们，请稍等，一切尽在安排中。

**主编的评语**

GROUP 3 – SABAH TRIP

照片构图相当理想，灌溉出SABAH每个岛的风味，由其是NATIONAL PARK，非常的优美，出乎主编预料。须补充的是，食物的简介。除了海鲜，SABAH还有着蛮多的小吃，如锅贴、及各类的水果。

文笔方面，须补充。说明不够明确，拖泥带水。

GROUP 6 – CAMERON TRIP

照片构图有点偏向摄影技巧。但本社非长欣赏你们的摄影技巧，也非常欣赏你们对摄影的坚决力，就如组合简介里所说的，用镜头说话，带出特别及具有新鲜感的一幕，请再接再厉。在你们精心设计的旅游说明书里，有两张照片主编非常喜欢，5R型向日葵之照，以及5R型茶园兼露台之照。本社将把这本金马仑简介书作为旅游推荐书，你们的精心设计，本社感怀满激。

文笔方面，相当好，说明明确，文字形容佳，再接再励。